Review: Prevalence of
depression, anxiety, and PTSD symptoms among patients of opioid agonist
treatment programmes in Ukraine during wartime {under peer review}
Reviewer: Mariia Mezhenska
Completed: 06-10-2025 07:13
Recommendation: Accept Submission
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Comments for the authors:
The article,
“Prevalence of depression, anxiety, and PTSD symptoms among patients of opioid
agonist treatment programmes in Ukraine during wartime,” examines point
prevalence and co-occurrence of depression, generalized anxiety, PTSD symptoms,
and suicidal ideation among OAT patients in 2023 (war year 2), and compares
these outcomes with a pre-war clinic sample from late 2021 - early 2022. The
topic is timely and important, the paper is generally clear, and the clinical
relevance is high.
I recommend
acceptance with minor revisions that will materially improve transparency and
interpretability without altering the main conclusions.
The central
inference hinges on comparing two independent clinic cohorts. Comparability of
the two cohorts is currently under-reported and needs to be shown. Because the
pre-war sample (Kyiv/Lviv/Sumy) differs in composition from the wartime sample
(Vinnytsia/Lviv/Sumy), readers need to see whether cross-cohort differences
reflect true changes or simply different case-mix. The article would benefit
from adding two concise descriptive tables, one for each cohort, reporting, at
a minimum, gender, age, city, and OAT medication
(methadone/buprenorphine/buvidal), with n/N shown for each stratum. Alongside
those tables, acknowledge explicitly that Kyiv was replaced by Vinnytsia in the
wartime wave. If possible, include a brief sensitivity check restricting pre/post
comparisons to the overlapping sites (Lviv and Sumy); if re-analysis is not
feasible, a clear caveat in Results and Limitations about the site swap and
possible influence of confounders that was not tested is sufficient.
The pre/post
analyses themselves are currently unadjusted (Mann–Whitney U for severity; χ² for prevalence), and therefore they compare the
two time periods without controlling for things that also differed between
periods (site mix: Kyiv vs Vinnytsia; season/month of data collection (pre-war
(Oct–Jan) vs war-year-2 (Apr–Oct)) invites seasonal effects on mood/anxiety;
gender proportions; medication mix). If those factors relate to the outcomes,
they can confound the pre-/post-contrast. Reasonable confounders should be
mentioned in the Discussion and the Limitations sections. Reporting effect sizes
with 95% CIs throughout the article and interpreting the results as
associations rather than causal effects is necessary. If the authors can add
one lightweight robustness model (e.g., a site-adjusted logistic regression for
the primary prevalence outcomes (pre vs during + site as a covariate), that
would further strengthen confidence without expanding the paper.
In the
Participants section (in the Methods section, not the Results), reporting
sample sizes for each cohort and providing a brief description of each sample
(sites, gender distribution, age, and OAT medication mix) is highly desirable.
The manuscript should also explicitly state that informed consent was obtained.
Moreover, because screening was interviewer-administered by clinic staff,
noting in the Limitations the risks of social desirability and interviewer
bias, especially potential underreporting of suicidal ideation, and briefly
describing privacy safeguards (private setting, standardized script, and
whether a self-administration option was offered) is highly recommended.
Finally, nonresponse on trauma/PTSD is substantial and likely informative (376
refused LEC-5; only 608 completed LEC-5, and 549 trauma-exposed completed
PCL-5), so PTSD prevalence is plausibly underestimated (people with the highest
trauma may refuse).
Furthermore,
the manuscript would benefit from a brief Methods subsection describing each
measurement scale (PHQ-9, GAD-7, PCL-5 with LEC-5 anchoring, and PHQ-9 item 9
for suicidal ideation; number of items used in the current study) and reporting
summary statistics for each cohort; as well as a succinct Data Analytics
section explaining the rationale for each analysis choice.
Medication
group contrasts (higher suicidal ideation/PTSD among buprenorphine vs methadone
recipients) are valuable but potentially influenced by confounders. Framing
these as exploratory and presenting minimal adjusted comparisons (medication +
age + gender + site) with adjusted odds ratios and CIs, ideally in a compact
supplement, would temper inference.
Clinical
relevance warrants explicit comment where statistically significant differences
are small. For example, the PHQ-9 mean increase from 7.42 to 7.90 is modest;
reporting the standardized mean difference and noting that the absolute change
appears below typical minimal clinically important difference thresholds would
help avoid over-interpretation of p-values.
Several small
inconsistencies are present, which I believe are typos, but should be fixed.
Sex counts are reversed in text (it says “95 males, 889 females”; tables
indicate 95 females, 889 males) and the methadone totals (764 in tables vs 746
elsewhere).
Thank you for
the opportunity to review this important work. The study addresses a pressing
public health question under exceptionally challenging circumstances, and the
effort by the authors and clinic teams is commendable. The suggestions above
are largely clarifications that enhance transparency rather than changes to the
study’s core message. With these interpretive notes in mind, the manuscript
stands as a valuable contribution to understanding mental health among OAT
patients during wartime, and it will be of clear interest to clinicians,
program leaders, and policymakers.