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Mental Health and Social Isolation among Sub-Saharan African Migrants in Tunisia: A Cross-Sectional Quantitative Study

We sincerely thank the reviewers for the time and expertise they devoted to the evaluation of our manuscript. Their insightful comments and constructive suggestions have been invaluable in improving the clarity, rigour, and overall quality of this work.

Reviewer 1: Mariia Mezhenska

We thank the reviewer for the detailed and constructive evaluation of the manuscript. The comments were particularly helpful in improving the theoretical grounding, methodological clarity, and alignment between objectives, analyses, and interpretation. In response, we clarified the exploratory nature of the study and revised several sections accordingly.

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Changes in the Manuscript

Insufficient theoretical framework and limited engagement with empirical studies

Recent empirical studies and systematic reviews were added to strengthen the theoretical grounding and better situate the study within current migration and mental health research.

Introduction (“Social Isolation and Mental Health”)

Biopsychosocial model insufficiently connected to research questions

The biopsychosocial framework was more explicitly linked to variable selection and research questions guiding the study.

Theoretical Framework

Superficial treatment of acculturative stress

This section was expanded with updated empirical literature and clearer positioning of acculturative stress within the study.

Acculturative Stress subsection

Objectives vague, absence of hypotheses, misalignment with analyses

Objectives were reformulated to reflect descriptive and relational aims. A Research Questions subsection was added to clarify analytical focus without formal hypothesis testing.

Introduction (Objectives; Research Questions)

Incorrect reference to Hajak et al. (2021)

The reference was clarified to reflect its relevance to stress-related constructs rather than acculturative stress per se.

Introduction

Interview methodology insufficiently justified

Methodological constraints (literacy, privacy, mistrust of written formats) were detailed, and the standardized interview protocol was clarified. Interviewer effects are now acknowledged as a limitation.

Methods (“Data Collection”); Limitations

Analytical strategy unclear or incoherent

The rationale for descriptive and univariate analyses was clarified, and statistical procedures were presented more transparently. Multivariate approaches are suggested for future research.

Methods (“Measures”; “Statistical Analysis”); Discussion (“Research Perspectives”)

Confusion between results and interpretation; inappropriate qualitative references; prevalence claims

Results and interpretation were clearly separated. Unsystematic qualitative observations were removed from Results, and references to prevalence were replaced with descriptions relative to theoretical scale midpoints.

Results; Discussion

Reviewer 2: Kamala Poudel

We thank the reviewer for the positive assessment of the manuscript and for the constructive comments regarding psychosocial resources and resilience. These suggestions helped clarify conceptual distinctions and improve the interpretation of clustering results.

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Nature and utilization of psychosocial resources

Definitions were clarified, and a distinction was made between perceived availability and actual utilization of resources. Differences across profiles were described more explicitly.

Methods; Results; Discussion

Measurement and variability of resilience across clusters

The resilience construct and its measurement were described in greater detail, and qualitative differences between clusters were clarified.

Measures; Results (Table 8 commentary)

Reviewer 3: Hanna Denysenko

We thank the reviewer for the comprehensive methodological feedback. The comments prompted substantial improvements in theoretical positioning, measurement transparency, and statistical interpretation.

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Weak theoretical framework

Engel’s biopsychosocial model and Berry’s acculturation framework were more explicitly linked to the research questions and measured dimensions.

Introduction; Theoretical Framework

Research objectives misaligned with analyses

Objective wording was revised to reflect bivariate and descriptive analyses. Limitations related to age and subgroup analyses were clarified.

Introduction (Objectives); Discussion (Limitations)

Measurement validity concerns

The feasibility-driven reduction of items was justified, internal consistency was reported, and the need for cultural validation in North African contexts was emphasized.

Methods (“Measures”); Limitations

Statistical interpretation overstated

Language implying prevalence, diagnosis, or clinical categorization was removed. “Clinical profiles” were reframed as “symptom–resource profiles.”

Abstract; Results; Discussion; Conclusions

Recommendations requiring new data

Suggestions requiring new fieldwork (larger samples, control groups, normative data) were acknowledged as priorities for future studies.

Limitations; Conclusions

Reviewer 4: Kateryna Bikir

We thank the reviewer for the encouraging feedback and for highlighting the relevance of the study. The suggestions contributed to strengthening the theoretical breadth and applied implications.

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Changes in the Manuscript

Inclusion of Bronfenbrenner’s socio-ecological model

The socio-ecological framework was incorporated to acknowledge multi-level influences while maintaining an individual-level analytical focus.

Introduction; Theoretical Framework

Transit-country dynamics insufficiently explored

The discussion was expanded using recent literature to better contextualize Tunisia as a transit setting and to identify directions for future research.

Discussion (“Research Perspectives”)

Claims on social isolation require stronger empirical support

Recent umbrella review evidence was added to reinforce the public health relevance of social isolation.

Introduction; References

Need for clearer intervention pathways

The Research Perspectives section was expanded to outline evidence-informed, community-based, and culturally sensitive intervention approaches.

Discussion (“Research Perspectives”); References

The revised manuscript clarifies its exploratory scope, strengthens theoretical and methodological coherence, and adopts a more cautious and transparent interpretive stance. The revisions directly address the reviewers’ concerns while preserving the study’s contribution as an initial quantitative investigation of mental health among Sub-Saharan African migrants in Tunisia.