Revision Summary
Mental Health and Social Isolation among Sub-Saharan African Migrants in Tunisia: A Cross-Sectional Quantitative Study
We sincerely thank the reviewers for the time and expertise they devoted to the evaluation of our manuscript. Their insightful comments and constructive suggestions have been invaluable in improving the clarity, rigour, and overall quality of this work.
Reviewer 1: Mariia Mezhenska
We thank the reviewer for the detailed and constructive evaluation of the manuscript. The comments were particularly helpful in improving the theoretical grounding, methodological clarity, and alignment between objectives, analyses, and interpretation. In response, we clarified the exploratory nature of the study and revised several sections accordingly.
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Insufficient theoretical framework and limited engagement with empirical studies |
Recent empirical studies and systematic reviews were added to strengthen the theoretical grounding and better situate the study within current migration and mental health research. |
Introduction (“Social Isolation and Mental Health”) |
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Biopsychosocial model insufficiently connected to research questions |
The biopsychosocial framework was more explicitly linked to variable selection and research questions guiding the study. |
Theoretical Framework |
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Superficial treatment of acculturative stress |
This section was expanded with updated empirical literature and clearer positioning of acculturative stress within the study. |
Acculturative Stress subsection |
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Objectives vague, absence of hypotheses, misalignment with analyses |
Objectives were reformulated to reflect descriptive and relational aims. A Research Questions subsection was added to clarify analytical focus without formal hypothesis testing. |
Introduction (Objectives; Research Questions) |
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Incorrect reference to Hajak et al. (2021) |
The reference was clarified to reflect its relevance to stress-related constructs rather than acculturative stress per se. |
Introduction |
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Interview methodology insufficiently justified |
Methodological constraints (literacy, privacy, mistrust of written formats) were detailed, and the standardized interview protocol was clarified. Interviewer effects are now acknowledged as a limitation. |
Methods (“Data Collection”); Limitations |
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Analytical strategy unclear or incoherent |
The rationale for descriptive and univariate analyses was clarified, and statistical procedures were presented more transparently. Multivariate approaches are suggested for future research. |
Methods (“Measures”; “Statistical Analysis”); Discussion (“Research Perspectives”) |
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Confusion between results and interpretation; inappropriate qualitative references; prevalence claims |
Results and interpretation were clearly separated. Unsystematic qualitative observations were removed from Results, and references to prevalence were replaced with descriptions relative to theoretical scale midpoints. |
Results; Discussion |
Reviewer 2: Kamala Poudel
We thank the reviewer for the positive assessment of the manuscript and for the constructive comments regarding psychosocial resources and resilience. These suggestions helped clarify conceptual distinctions and improve the interpretation of clustering results.
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Nature and utilization of psychosocial resources |
Definitions were clarified, and a distinction was made between perceived availability and actual utilization of resources. Differences across profiles were described more explicitly. |
Methods; Results; Discussion |
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Measurement and variability of resilience across clusters |
The resilience construct and its measurement were described in greater detail, and qualitative differences between clusters were clarified. |
Measures; Results (Table 8 commentary) |
Reviewer 3: Hanna Denysenko
We thank the reviewer for the comprehensive methodological feedback. The comments prompted substantial improvements in theoretical positioning, measurement transparency, and statistical interpretation.
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Weak theoretical framework |
Engel’s biopsychosocial model and Berry’s acculturation framework were more explicitly linked to the research questions and measured dimensions. |
Introduction; Theoretical Framework |
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Research objectives misaligned with analyses |
Objective wording was revised to reflect bivariate and descriptive analyses. Limitations related to age and subgroup analyses were clarified. |
Introduction (Objectives); Discussion (Limitations) |
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Measurement validity concerns |
The feasibility-driven reduction of items was justified, internal consistency was reported, and the need for cultural validation in North African contexts was emphasized. |
Methods (“Measures”); Limitations |
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Statistical interpretation overstated |
Language implying prevalence, diagnosis, or clinical categorization was removed. “Clinical profiles” were reframed as “symptom–resource profiles.” |
Abstract; Results; Discussion; Conclusions |
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Recommendations requiring new data |
Suggestions requiring new fieldwork (larger samples, control groups, normative data) were acknowledged as priorities for future studies. |
Limitations; Conclusions |
Reviewer 4: Kateryna Bikir
We thank the reviewer for the encouraging feedback and for highlighting the relevance of the study. The suggestions contributed to strengthening the theoretical breadth and applied implications.
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Inclusion of Bronfenbrenner’s socio-ecological model |
The socio-ecological framework was incorporated to acknowledge multi-level influences while maintaining an individual-level analytical focus. |
Introduction; Theoretical Framework |
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Transit-country dynamics insufficiently explored |
The discussion was expanded using recent literature to better contextualize Tunisia as a transit setting and to identify directions for future research. |
Discussion (“Research Perspectives”) |
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Claims on social isolation require stronger empirical support |
Recent umbrella review evidence was added to reinforce the public health relevance of social isolation. |
Introduction; References |
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Need for clearer intervention pathways |
The Research Perspectives section was expanded to outline evidence-informed, community-based, and culturally sensitive intervention approaches. |
Discussion (“Research Perspectives”); References |
The revised manuscript clarifies its exploratory scope, strengthens theoretical and methodological coherence, and adopts a more cautious and transparent interpretive stance. The revisions directly address the reviewers’ concerns while preserving the study’s contribution as an initial quantitative investigation of mental health among Sub-Saharan African migrants in Tunisia.